i like more a style dungeon keeper 1, provokes more his fear and is very much an original

Important Notes:
-Add DK1's aggressive and psycho look to Reaper.
-Make chin smaller, enlarge Mouth.
-Nose more Snout-like.
Last edited by Blutonium; September 18th, 2010 at 20:11.
i like more a style dungeon keeper 1, provokes more his fear and is very much an original
OK. Notes updated.
Make his loin cloth wider. It makes him look freaky, in the wrong way.
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Agreed longer and wider loin cloth, also maybe give it a look more like that of a piece of ripped cloth.
I think it would be a good idea to reconsider the idea syn had a while ago of giving him a belt.
Body wise I think his waist and his lower ribs should be correctly sized in proportion to the size of his chest.
Last edited by A New Room; September 10th, 2010 at 18:58.
Mentor: "You remove your own heart, fortify it behind stonewalls, deadly traps, and then rely heavily on beings you create yourself. Even psychoanalysts lack words for just how absurdly emo you are…"
I dunno the belt. Maybe a slightly larger mouth and a different nose, but if he is wearing armor than he would probably be wearing a proper loincloth rather than ripped cloth. The loincloth could be wider at the back tho...
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Mentor: "You remove your own heart, fortify it behind stonewalls, deadly traps, and then rely heavily on beings you create yourself. Even psychoanalysts lack words for just how absurdly emo you are…"
Bigger mouth, bigger teeths. And perhaps his chin shouldn't be split as much as it currently is. Everything else, is very nice.
I agree with with changing the cloth and I quite like how he has unrealistic hips (but make them slightly wider). Also, the back of his head looks hilarious in a bad way

