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    Default Re: Grave Rider

    Admittedly I did for the first time in a while , but I would like a response as I'm unsure whether it the ability fits, flows and is balanced.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MeinCookie View Post

    Level 10 - Duplicate Self (Boss Only)
    A self-targeting special ability which spawns a complete duplicate of the caster with the same abilities. The duplicate lasts for ever but the original caster will die 30 seconds after the spell has been cast. When the duplicate spawns he will be exactly the same except for having completely refreshed health.

    "Boss" Version
    The "Boss" version is a more powerful Grave Rider who appears on some maps as an extra or neutral adversary. His abilities differ slightly in that Stunning Blow is available at level 4 instead of level 8 and that Spirit Self is level 8. At level 10 he gains an ability called Duplicate Self which is available only to Boss version.
    Possible "Boss Version" added

    EDIT - Bump... does anyone have any other suggestions? I realize the Grave Rider is lacking in background a bit...
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    20 secs of thought:

    Background:
    The Grave Rider once was a wide-known ruler feared by his minions, but his minions did not respect him and they asked a Good lord for help. The Grave Rider got overthrown by legions of knights. He now seeks to take revenge on both good lords and enemy minions. His dead soul will only take shelter in the thougher creatures.

    Feel free to edit it, gave it a few moments of thought.

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    I like your train of thought , particularly the "overthrown by a legion of knights" part. I'll use that .

    EDIT - Okay... I didn't directly use it but it gave me the idea.
    Last edited by MeinCookie; April 16th, 2010 at 13:21.
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    Thanks

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